Nice game, though if it would be possible to implement an option that tones down the brightness or the filter. With this color palette it's a bit straining on the eyes.
Hey, overall I think this is a very solid proof of concept that has potential for some meat. The art style/filter is probably gonna be a deal breaker to some, but I didn't mind it.
My main criticism right now would be the pacing of the scenes, and that include the sex ones.
I actually liked the introduction scenes, especially the one with the blind girl (I'm very bad at remember names, lmao), and the dialogue choice scenes as well.
The issue is that pacing and tone of these questions feel more like they'd be what the doctor would say after like... the third session in, and not what he'd say upon literally just meeting these people.
this could be intentional, to more or less show off the characters, but on the off-chance it isn't, I would suggest that these sessions should maybe take place over the course of a few days, with more introductory dialogues happening in the first, progressing to the more romantic/lovely-dove stuff in later ones.
The other pacing issue is the sex scenes. IMO they feel like they're jumping in right before they're about to finish. This would be immediately helped by the addition of a lead-in/foreplay segments, as well as some kind of short aftercare one. With the current sex scenes, I think some prose descriptions of what's happening between the characters would really help too, as right now it's primarily sound effects, noises, and dialogue, which doesn't help with the pacing.
Of course, additional images and the like would also help, but I really think it's primarily a writing issue for the pacing of the sex scenes right now.
Other then that, a solid start, one that I hope to see improve as time goes on.
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Nice game, though if it would be possible to implement an option that tones down the brightness or the filter. With this color palette it's a bit straining on the eyes.
Filter thing is my biggest regret :(
Are you aware this is showing up on an apk site as an android port? Just wanted You to know in case you didn't approve it.
Lol. Idk about that.
Will this game have a girldick option?
No. For now...
Glad to see you made a new version of this game! (or I just confused Embi with some other deer girl, sry)
I hope you won't call yourself a "mess" or "garbage" like you did in the last version..
oh, also maybe I'll try this new version later, but for now I can only read the description and look at the pictures, heh
Glad to see you back, Haru!
haaiii ^w^
Hey, overall I think this is a very solid proof of concept that has potential for some meat. The art style/filter is probably gonna be a deal breaker to some, but I didn't mind it.
My main criticism right now would be the pacing of the scenes, and that include the sex ones.
I actually liked the introduction scenes, especially the one with the blind girl (I'm very bad at remember names, lmao), and the dialogue choice scenes as well.
The issue is that pacing and tone of these questions feel more like they'd be what the doctor would say after like... the third session in, and not what he'd say upon literally just meeting these people.
this could be intentional, to more or less show off the characters, but on the off-chance it isn't, I would suggest that these sessions should maybe take place over the course of a few days, with more introductory dialogues happening in the first, progressing to the more romantic/lovely-dove stuff in later ones.
The other pacing issue is the sex scenes. IMO they feel like they're jumping in right before they're about to finish. This would be immediately helped by the addition of a lead-in/foreplay segments, as well as some kind of short aftercare one. With the current sex scenes, I think some prose descriptions of what's happening between the characters would really help too, as right now it's primarily sound effects, noises, and dialogue, which doesn't help with the pacing.
Of course, additional images and the like would also help, but I really think it's primarily a writing issue for the pacing of the sex scenes right now.
Other then that, a solid start, one that I hope to see improve as time goes on.Thanks for your feedback, Busyman!
Any help appreciated!
Does the whole game have the blue/purple filter all the time?
yep.
Okay, thanks for the heads up. It's a little too much for my eyes, but I'm sure you have your reasons.